The ending to the Dark

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4 Responses to The ending to the Dark

  1. karuk says:

    use only one adverb for one verb instead of two as it doesn’t make sense. On the other hand, you have described what Lazlo does next using your senses.

  2. azams says:

    Nice work, you used a wide variation of punctuation, next time put speech on a different line

  3. sentk says:

    Well done you have used powerful adjectives next time use clauses to add details. YOU ARE BOSS AT WRITING!!!!

  4. nirar says:

    Well done AMMAARIO you have used punctuation, nect time vary your sentences

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