Well Done Khavin!!!!!! You used great expanded noun phrases but next time try use a wider range of punctuation
You used a variety of sentences but in some sentences your word choices were confusing
Awesome work khavin:) You used powerful adjectives next time use only one tense as you can not switch.
Great description Khavin! You have made me smile, next time use more punctuation
Great words but try using adverbs.
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Well Done Khavin!!!!!!
You used great expanded noun phrases but next time try use a wider range of punctuation
You used a variety of sentences but in some sentences your word choices were confusing
Awesome work khavin:)
You used powerful adjectives next time use only one tense as you can not switch.
Great description Khavin! You have made me smile, next time use more punctuation
Great words but try using adverbs.