the ending of the dark

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2 Responses to the ending of the dark

  1. ramlk says:

    Well done! You have used ISPACED openers! Next time try to use a range of punctuation! GREAT WORK 🙂

  2. gondr says:

    amazing you have used lots of adjectives
    try to use more pronouns e.g. Lazlo=he/his

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