mohammed irfan paragraph

Posted on May 17, 2016 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to mohammed irfan paragraph

  1. Islaa says:
    May 17, 2016 at 9:54 am

    Star:Good use of the style of the author.
    Star:Great similes
    Wish:Check your grammar

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  2. Islaa says:
    May 17, 2016 at 9:58 am

    Star: Good use of style of the author.
    Star: Great similes.
    Wish Check Grammar.
    By Arif

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  3. vands says:
    May 17, 2016 at 10:03 am

    S-Great use of commas
    S-You have written as if you were the author.
    W- Check your grammar, you haven’t put capital letters after your full stops.

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  4. Safwan!!!!!! says:
    May 17, 2016 at 10:09 am

    *GOOD DESCRIPTION
    *YOU WROTE LIKE THE AUTHOR
    [W]PUNCTUATION

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