Great Work Zainab. You have used great suspense throughout your paragraph. And you have used writing in the style of the author. Write your numbers as letters. Esha
Star: Great use of speech! Star: I like your use of metaphors! Wish: Remember your use of punctuation! E.g: commas. WELL DONE!
Star- I like your ideas Star-Your introduction is very engaging Wish-Your ending is abrupt, you could end with a rhetorical question From Surabhi
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Great Work Zainab.
You have used great suspense throughout your paragraph.
And you have used writing in the style of the author.
Write your numbers as letters.
Esha
Star: Great use of speech!
Star: I like your use of metaphors!
Wish: Remember your use of punctuation! E.g: commas.
WELL DONE!
Star- I like your ideas
Star-Your introduction is very engaging
Wish-Your ending is abrupt, you could end with a rhetorical question
From Surabhi