A leg of lamb by Surabhi

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2 Responses to A leg of lamb by Surabhi

  1. Prithikaa says:

    * Well done Surabhi! You have kept to the same style as the author while using a more older version of English.
    * You have used higher level punctuation and rhetorical questions.
    Wish- Try and use similes and metaphors to uplevel your work
    from Prithikaa :]

  2. amina says:

    S: great work.
    S: great starters.
    W:description

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