S: great description. S: great VCOP. W: remember when you use speech marks in writing you start it on a next line.
You need to check your work, it doesn’t make sense were it is the part when she goes into the car. I like the start, it has a lot of detail which I like. Good work , just remember to check your work and then it would be the best.
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S: great description.
S: great VCOP.
W: remember when you use speech marks in writing you start it on a next line.
You need to check your work, it doesn’t make sense were it is the part when she goes into the car.
I like the start, it has a lot of detail which I like.
Good work , just remember to check your work and then it would be the best.