S-Great Description used S-Also you have created good atmosphere W-Next time add commas for suspense Layla
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You have amazing description. You have used tension to make the reader read more, which is very well done.
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S-Great Description used
S-Also you have created good atmosphere
W-Next time add commas for suspense
Layla
🙂
You have amazing description.
You have used tension to make the reader read more, which is very well done.
🙂