Star- Great story Serena you added commas in the right place to add tension.
Star- You’ve added rhetorical questions to involve the reader at all times.
Wish- Make sure you start on a line when there is speech.
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Star- Great story Serena you added commas in the right place to add tension.
Star- You’ve added rhetorical questions to involve the reader at all times.
Wish- Make sure you start on a line when there is speech.