A good tale, well done. In your next story try to connect each sentence better so that the story flows through the plot and the reader can become really engaged with the tale.
Thanks you for reading my story
Tea well done. To improve you can add more adjectives to make your story better. From Alima
I will add more adjectives for you love T’ea
I like your story it is outstanding but the bit when you said it came back you could’ve put it in speech marks. Anyway a good effort I really like it!
From Sara
I will do the speech mark Sara love T’ea
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A good tale, well done. In your next story try to connect each sentence better so that the story flows through the plot and the reader can become really engaged with the tale.
Thanks you for reading my story
Tea well done. To improve you can add more adjectives to make your story better. From Alima
I will add more adjectives for you
love T’ea
I like your story it is outstanding but the bit when you said it came back you could’ve put it in speech marks. Anyway a good effort I really like it!
From Sara
I will do the speech mark Sara
love T’ea