The sun blanket

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4 Responses to The sun blanket

  1. bhasn says:

    Well done Mashi! I think you could check over your work:)

    by Nandana

  2. jheem says:

    It was really good Mashi. Just remember your tenses, you started wit the 3rd person the switched to first person.

  3. kogud says:

    Good work do not forget to check over your work, Danushan.

  4. kumak says:

    VERY GOOD MASHI BUT
    REMEMBER YOUR TENSES

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