* – Well done, you have used higher level vocabulary. * – Your ending is so good which makes the reader continue thinking W – Try to add more speech marks
WOW i LOVE your description it is SO good, maby you could write what you are going to do to stop the social services from taking the baby. xx 🙂
Wow! What a start somran. This diary entry is amazing. You have met your success criteria. Well done.
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* – Well done, you have used higher level vocabulary.
* – Your ending is so good which makes the reader continue thinking
W – Try to add more speech marks
WOW i LOVE your description it is SO good,
maby you could write what you are going to do to stop the social services from taking the baby.
xx
🙂
Wow! What a start somran. This diary entry is amazing. You have met your success criteria. Well done.