Hi Vanessa that was really good about how she only needed a little sunshine to cure her
Thank you so much
I really like your ideas and I really like how you’ve sectioned out each of the stories my favourite is the Antarctics blanket and I think you need to think of some more wow words then it would be perfect welldone:) From Aisha 5a
well done vanessa, I like how you sectioned the paragraphs
Thanks
Thanks Aisha for the feedback
I LIKE HOW YOU SAID THAT THE PRINCESS NEEDED A LITTLE SUNSHINE
WELL DONE VANESSA !!!!
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Hi Vanessa that was really good about how she only needed a little sunshine to cure her
Thank you so much
I really like your ideas and I really like how you’ve sectioned out each of the stories my favourite is the Antarctics blanket and I think you need to think of some more wow words then it would be perfect welldone:)
From Aisha 5a
well done vanessa, I like how you sectioned the paragraphs
Thanks
Thanks Aisha for the feedback
I LIKE HOW YOU SAID THAT THE PRINCESS NEEDED A LITTLE SUNSHINE
WELL DONE VANESSA !!!!
Thanks