This is a great piece of writing sen! 🙂 well done!
Good vocabulary and I like the way you ended it(She heard a wicked laugh). You could have used similes but I still like the description.
I like your idea of a jungle blanket. Great atmosphere used. Well Done!
I like your use of vocab
very good work and good use of vocabulary
I like your use of vocab.
Nice work sen.:) 🙂
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This is a great piece of writing sen! 🙂 well done!
Good vocabulary and I like the way you ended it(She heard a wicked laugh). You could have used similes but I still like the description.
I like your idea of a jungle blanket.
Great atmosphere used. Well Done!
I like your use of vocab
very good work and good use of vocabulary
I like your use of vocab.
Nice work sen.:) 🙂