jungle

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7 Responses to jungle

  1. Aadam says:

    This is a great piece of writing sen! 🙂 well done!

  2. alir1 says:

    Good vocabulary and I like the way you ended it(She heard a wicked laugh). You could have used similes but I still like the description.

  3. nuckr says:

    I like your idea of a jungle blanket.
    Great atmosphere used. Well Done!

  4. adamz says:

    I like your use of vocab

  5. kumak says:

    very good work and good use of vocabulary

  6. natha says:

    I like your use of vocab.

  7. kogud says:

    Nice work sen.:) 🙂

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