S: Great work Zaeem! I really liked how you’ve used in-depth description and similes.
S: I really like how you’ve used metaphors and your punctuation is all in the right places. I also like how you’ve used commas for effect.
W: There are some spelling mistakes in your writing for example: betwixt .
S: Great work Zaeem! I really liked how you’ve used in-depth description and similes.
S: I really like how you’ve used metaphors and your punctuation is all in the right places. I also like how you’ve used commas for effect.
W: There are some spelling mistakes in your writing for example: betwixt .