Good work Arif you have included that it is a diary entry by writing dear diary so that the reader knows that that’s why you are writing in 1st person and not third. You have also included what has happened in the story by reading the text and including the main events. Next time read over your work because your third sentence starts with ‘Now I that my mid clear up’ and it doesn’t make sence. Great Work.
-Serena
Good work Arif you have included that it is a diary entry by writing dear diary so that the reader knows that that’s why you are writing in 1st person and not third. You have also included what has happened in the story by reading the text and including the main events. Next time read over your work because your third sentence starts with ‘Now I that my mid clear up’ and it doesn’t make sence. Great Work.
-Serena