You could add in more adjectives from your bff T’ea
I like your story it is very descriptive but you could of improved it by adding some more adjectives. From Sara
I would love to travel in marshmallow boats and then dance in gumdrops, what an imaginative and creative tale, well done!
Thanks for the lovely comment Secret Book Club Member. I delighted to read this wonderful comment you gave me and once again Thanks a lot.
Brilliant story, I liked it because you thought of the story in a creative way and I love the way you used semi colons and the spelling was all correct, I cannot wait for your next story, I bet it would be so amazing!
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You could add in more adjectives from your bff T’ea
I like your story it is very descriptive but you could of improved it by adding some more adjectives.
From Sara
I would love to travel in marshmallow boats and then dance in gumdrops, what an imaginative and creative tale, well done!
Thanks for the lovely comment Secret Book Club Member. I delighted to read this wonderful comment you gave me and once again Thanks a lot.
Brilliant story, I liked it because you thought of the story in a creative way and I love the way you used semi colons and the spelling was all correct, I cannot wait for your next story, I bet it would be so amazing!