Aniqa this is a really good start. You have used really interesting adjectives to add description which is a great idea, but you didn’t write a lot. Id love to see more, so please focus and type quickly. Mr Stringer
Aniqa the start was good but you could have focused more on your writing. sarinah
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Aniqa this is a really good start. You have used really interesting adjectives to add description which is a great idea, but you didn’t write a lot. Id love to see more, so please focus and type quickly. Mr Stringer
Aniqa the start was good but you could have focused more on your writing. sarinah