Wow Assia, you have used great vocabulary in your writing. Im really impressed with your story. Can you make sure you only use a full stop when you need to. Mr Stringer.
Very nice story! Great effort!! I love your creativity! Please finish it of though! I am really excited to see the rest! Keep it Up!
Your Sincerely: Nakai 🙂
Wow Assia, you have used great vocabulary in your writing. Im really impressed with your story. Can you make sure you only use a full stop when you need to. Mr Stringer.
I think its amazing but your full stops are in the wrong place. Maybe finish of the ending I am looking forward in seeing the ending.
I think its amazing but your full stops are in the wrong place. Maybe finish of the ending I am looking forward in seeing the ending. Rhiyaa 3j
Your very imagitive
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Hi use cepetel when sentes sterter.
Very nice story! Great effort!! I love your creativity! Please finish it of though! I am really excited to see the rest! Keep it Up!
Your Sincerely: Nakai 🙂
That was amazing assia ,but you could have used your full stops in the write place.sarinah