my hero speech

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2 Responses to my hero speech

  1. eodriscoll says:

    Good choice of words and linking ideas with a variety of conjunctions. You described what makes a true hero nicely.

  2. hussa says:

    OMG, I loved your speech it was really good, you used a great use of punctuation and it was very formal, I also liked the great colours you’ve used 🙂

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