Well done, your work was very gripping. You talked as if you were actually Ruskin and that’s why your work told an interesting and brilliant story. Please check your punctuation, it makes it easier for the reader to understand. Overall you have done a good job.
From Jayanna Class: 6E (:
GOOD love it and do some more pretty please
I love your work keep up the good work
class 41
by Isha and Asra
I like yours it was very thoughtful
I like how your work is long and it has a few adjectives
I love how you wrote my parents are a bit silly and I like all the are things aswell
I enjoyed reading your speech. Remember to use capital letters in your blog, just like you use this in your books.
Well done, your work was very gripping. You talked as if you were actually Ruskin and that’s why your work told an interesting and brilliant story. Please check your punctuation, it makes it easier for the reader to understand. Overall you have done a good job.
From Jayanna Class: 6E (:
well done you have showed me your character has a hard life.