I like your paragraphs.
short and sweet steps to to be a hero
I like how you added the things a superhero needs
What a thoughtful well planned piece of writing. You thought very carefully about our success criteria and everything we have learnt so far. Well done!
Yes I strongly agree but I think her work is the best so far.
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you included lots of detail WELL DONE
I really like your work I like how you explained all the parts a hero needs 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Your speech is very thoughtful but try to do more please
Well done in explaining that heroes don’t need muscles
Fatima I really loved it
I really like your Hero speech Fatima. I think it is brilliant. I can tell you thought about it before writing it down.
Fatima I like your writing it is great
I like your stile of writting
:! YOUR work is really good!!!!
very well plan well done
I like your wrting Fatima keep it up.
your story is good maybe a bit more description
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I like your paragraphs.
short and sweet steps to to be a hero
I like how you added the things a superhero needs
What a thoughtful well planned piece of writing. You thought very carefully about our success criteria and everything we have learnt so far. Well done!
Yes I strongly agree but I think her work is the best so far.
well done good work
you included lots of detail WELL DONE
I really like your work
I like how you explained all the parts a hero needs
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Your speech is very thoughtful but try to do more please
Well done in explaining that heroes don’t need muscles
Fatima I really loved it
I really like your Hero speech Fatima. I think it is brilliant. I can tell you thought about it before writing it down.
Fatima I like your writing it is great
I like your stile of writting
:! YOUR work is really good!!!!
very well plan well done
I like your wrting Fatima keep it up.
very well plan well done
your story is good maybe a bit more description