Brilliant start, great detail. I especially liked the sentence, ‘a tiny brown ball of a puppy trailing a streak of a blue leash.’ Good similes. Overall a great piece of writing!
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Brilliant start, great detail. I especially liked the sentence, ‘a tiny brown ball of a puppy trailing a streak of a blue leash.’ Good similes. Overall a great piece of writing!