You had an interesting idea for your story. Next time, don’t rush it and think carefully about what you can add to your writing to make it even better. How about some expanded noun phrases to describe? You could also add in the some dialogue to show what the characters are saying. Also don’t muddle up the past and present tense.
You had an interesting idea for your story. Next time, don’t rush it and think carefully about what you can add to your writing to make it even better. How about some expanded noun phrases to describe? You could also add in the some dialogue to show what the characters are saying. Also don’t muddle up the past and present tense.