This is a great attempt at writing a very scary story. With your next tale, try and remember that 100 words is not that many so maybe think about a more simple story plot which can be told in a creative and engaging way. Also, just check your editing before posting. Well done, I look forward to reading your next story.
Wow Arif! What a spooky story. I really liked your ambitious word choices. Remember to check your punctuation.
This is a great attempt at writing a very scary story. With your next tale, try and remember that 100 words is not that many so maybe think about a more simple story plot which can be told in a creative and engaging way. Also, just check your editing before posting. Well done, I look forward to reading your next story.