Sound like you’re a very experienced gymnast Aman! A great diary entry. Next time, improve your writing by adding in more adjectives and using words to describe your feelings.
well done your diary entry is amazing, I could really understand the fun you had because of all of the exclamation marks you put in. 🙂
I like how you have put sentence openers and what you done in the holidays next time use adjectives.
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Sound like you’re a very experienced gymnast Aman! A great diary entry. Next time, improve your writing by adding in more adjectives and using words to describe your feelings.
well done your diary entry is amazing, I could really understand the fun you had because of all of the exclamation marks you put in. 🙂
I like how you have put sentence openers and what you done in the holidays next time use adjectives.