Ryan, you have added some adjectives and we really like your idea. You have used your imagination. Even better if you add in full stops and punctuation marks in your writing.
Mr. Ali and Class 2L
Even better if add full stops.
A good start why don’t you use interesting words
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Ryan, you have added some adjectives and we really like your idea. You have used your imagination.
Even better if you add in full stops and punctuation marks in your writing.
Mr. Ali and Class 2L
Even better if add full stops.
A good start why don’t you use interesting words