Wow ! That story was amazing ! I liked how you used amazing words. Next time try to use more full stops .
Wow that was amazing. But you could have some adjective words in and wrote a bit more. By Adsaya To Zaina
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Wow ! That story was amazing ! I liked how you used amazing words. Next time try to use more full stops .
Wow that was amazing.
But you could have some adjective words in and wrote a bit more.
By Adsaya
To Zaina