Hi Zia,
What a great way to introduce a new character to the story; I really liked the way you connected him to and made reference to prior events in the story and the way you used detail to imply things about his character; this is something talented writers do.
Next time edit before you publish for errors, it’s an important part of the writing process.
Mrs M
Hi Zia,
What a great way to introduce a new character to the story; I really liked the way you connected him to and made reference to prior events in the story and the way you used detail to imply things about his character; this is something talented writers do.
Next time edit before you publish for errors, it’s an important part of the writing process.
Mrs M
I will remember to edit my work thank you for your advice
Kind Regards
Zia 5B