Good job Aadeeb, I really like how you used precise vocabulary to help paint a picture in your reader’s mind. Always make time to check for typos before you publish.
I enjoyed this tale, I think you used “ly” words effective to reduce word count without losing descriptive effect. I also enjoyed the twist at the end of the tale. I agree with your other comments, double check before posting to ensure little mistakes in typing don’t detract from the quality of your writing.
Good job Aadeeb, I really like how you used precise vocabulary to help paint a picture in your reader’s mind. Always make time to check for typos before you publish.
I enjoyed this tale, I think you used “ly” words effective to reduce word count without losing descriptive effect. I also enjoyed the twist at the end of the tale. I agree with your other comments, double check before posting to ensure little mistakes in typing don’t detract from the quality of your writing.
I like your story and I like your title too. Great work 🙂 – Karolina
nice aadeeb you really amazing when it comes to writing you are destined to win
Nice writing Aadeeb, I like how you picked words carefully.