jack frost and the evil fire king

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1 Response to jack frost and the evil fire king

  1. nkang says:

    A wonderful story Tanjob. I’ve really enjoyed reading this. You’ve used punctuation and dialogue really well. Try to challenge yourself to add similes to your writing next time.

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