Hi Hafsa, Some really great description here and use of feeling to express just how chaotic this would be. Next time use phrases like’ I thought to myself ‘ to express thoughts to keep it clear. Mrs M
ok I will try and use phrases
Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *
Comment *
Name *
Email *
Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment.
Δ
Hi Hafsa,
Some really great description here and use of feeling to express just how chaotic this would be.
Next time use phrases like’ I thought to myself ‘ to express thoughts to keep it clear.
Mrs M
ok
I will try and use phrases