Some were, in the middle of no were. by iva(friends included)

3 Responses to Some were, in the middle of no were. by iva(friends included)

1. nanand says:

   July 7, 2016 at 10:03 am

   Hi Amazing, terrific Iva Eremieva,

   This was a really fun read; you used the narrators voice really well to draw me into your story. remember to edit before your publish as I can see some errors.
   Mrs M

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2. eremi says:

   July 7, 2016 at 10:04 am

   Okay Mrs Moore thanks

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3. asarm says:

   July 7, 2016 at 10:08 am

   yeah I agree with Mrs Moore it was really good well done on your work also
   you are jumping between past and present
   p.s: really good I’m proud with you.
   keep it up
   by maleeha

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