This is really good nice use of similes but next time try and use different sentence starter. overall good work
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD AND NNICE DESCRIPTION BUT IIT DOESN’T MAKE SENSE A BIT
Wow Amelie that was really amazing and great to read I loved how you kept it nice and simple to improve you can use more descriptive phrases other than that, that was lovely
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This is really good nice use of similes but next time try and use different sentence starter.
overall good work
THIS WAS REALLY GOOD AND NNICE DESCRIPTION BUT IIT DOESN’T MAKE SENSE A BIT
Wow Amelie that was really amazing
and great to read
I loved how you kept it nice and simple
to improve you can use more descriptive phrases
other than that, that was lovely