The idea and story was quite good but the first part didn’t make sense and there were a few spelling mistakes. But the all around idea was great 🙂
Leon the idea of the story was great but there was some spelling mistake. 🙂 (:
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The idea and story was quite good but the first part didn’t make sense and there were a few spelling mistakes. But the all around idea was great 🙂
Leon the idea of the story was great but there was some spelling mistake. 🙂 (:
From your friend – Olimaran