charlies lucky day

2 Responses to charlies lucky day

1. asarm says:

   October 24, 2016 at 8:19 am

   Hi Iva
   wow this story is well written i love the way how you have used wonderful adjectives and it was a really good setting
   however next time think about how u could describe the charterers more using descriptive language.

   by maleeha

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2. asarm says:

   October 24, 2016 at 8:20 am

   Hi Iva
   wow this story is nicely written i like the way how you have used wonderful adjectives and it was a really good setting place
   however next time think about how u could describe the charterers more using descriptive language.

   by maleeha

   Reply