Hi Sara,
I like your post to Patrick George about the drove of Bullocks. You have used lots of wonderful vocabulary. I also like where you have used lots of formal language towards this amazing letter. I like where you have told him about what you have been doing in your class about his book. You have also told him your favourite part in his story. The main line I like is ‘ The book was packed with lots amazing information, it was also very, very interesting!’ You have used lots of powerful information.
A very well done!
By: Esha Patel!
Hi Sara,
I like your post to Patrick George about the drove of Bullocks. You have used lots of wonderful vocabulary. I also like where you have used lots of formal language towards this amazing letter. I like where you have told him about what you have been doing in your class about his book. You have also told him your favourite part in his story. The main line I like is ‘ The book was packed with lots amazing information, it was also very, very interesting!’ You have used lots of powerful information.
A very well done!
By: Esha Patel!
Thanks Esha.