savio jumbo56

3 Responses to savio jumbo56

1. ranaz says:

   January 9, 2017 at 5:01 pm

   Hi Savio
   Love your work
   You really put a lot of effort into this writing.
   Next time add some pictures
   Well Done!!!
   From Zayd

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2. David Litchfield says:

   January 13, 2017 at 8:54 am

   Hi Savio,
   I like the way you told me what the other bear thought of my bear and how you described him.
   Always check your spelling before you publish, I spotted a mistake.
   Keep up the great writing
   David Litchfield

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3. agraa says:

   February 10, 2017 at 9:35 pm

   Hi Savio
   You put a lot of great adjectives
   Add more pictures
   Well Done!!!!!
   from Anushka

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