bats come out of the walls by tawana

4 Responses to bats come out of the walls by tawana

1. nanand says:

   March 23, 2017 at 2:50 pm

   Hi Tawana
   You have a lovely natural voice to your writing that makes me want to read more!
   Try to include more description so your reader can get a clear picture in their minds.
   Mrs M

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2. mannt says:

   March 23, 2017 at 3:47 pm

   This is very good work Tawana Neha and Nakai

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3. mannt says:

   March 23, 2017 at 3:51 pm

   Very creative Tawana, very impressed with your story writing skills.

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4. mannt says:

   March 23, 2017 at 3:56 pm

   Amazing creative writing! well done Tawana.
   Miss Smith

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