Hi Sara,
This was great! YOu made great word choices that made your story really interesting to read. Next time you need to check before you publish, there’s lots of missing punctuation which makes it a little difficult to follow. Mrs M
lovely story …great use of adjectives…
Well done Sara, great choice of interesting adjectives!
good work, well done for describing you work
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Hi Sara,
This was great! YOu made great word choices that made your story really interesting to read. Next time you need to check before you publish, there’s lots of missing punctuation which makes it a little difficult to follow.
Mrs M
lovely story …great use of adjectives…
Well done Sara, great choice of interesting adjectives!
good work, well done for describing you work