Oh my! What a scary start to your story Simrath! I love the way you used feelings to create tension. Next time remember to read your work back and add commas when you pasue and use speech marks around the words that people say. Mrs M
hi simrath
good work keep it!!
Wow!!! what a scary story, brilliant imagination. Just make sure you read your work back and correct punctuation but very well done!!!
mummy
Hi simrath good work by saras dad
Excellent work . Very well written Simrath. Keep up the good work!!
Do your picture last and keep up the good work
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Oh my! What a scary start to your story Simrath! I love the way you used feelings to create tension.
Next time remember to read your work back and add commas when you pasue and use speech marks around the words that people say.
Mrs M
hi simrath
good work keep it!!
Wow!!! what a scary story, brilliant imagination. Just make sure you read your work back and correct punctuation but very well done!!!
mummy
Hi simrath
good work
by saras dad
Excellent work . Very well written Simrath. Keep up the good work!!
Do your picture last and keep up the good work