Hi Janna,
I loved your story, full of emotion. Can I suggest that maybe you try and have a quick review before you submit. If you can do this you may spot any spelling or punctuation mistakes. Well done for writing a beautiful story 🙂
Great piece of writing, well done Janna. One small tip would be to have a quick review before you submit, this will allow you to spot and amend any punctuation or spelling errors you may have made. Keep up the good work.
Hi Janna,
I loved your story, full of emotion. Can I suggest that maybe you try and have a quick review before you submit. If you can do this you may spot any spelling or punctuation mistakes. Well done for writing a beautiful story 🙂
thank you mrs winter it’s a pleasure
Hi Janna,
I enjoyed reading your writing. The way you use ‘remember’ is striking and I like the ending. Thanks for sharing.
thanks again
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Great piece of writing, well done Janna. One small tip would be to have a quick review before you submit, this will allow you to spot and amend any punctuation or spelling errors you may have made. Keep up the good work.
thank you again and I will check my spelling
your poem was really emotive because of your brilliant word choice and nice sentence at the end.
thanks alex and i also replied to yours too
Hi Janna
I love your detail in your work, you have a good rhythm to your poem.
next time cheek your caps and spelling
Somran:)
thank you guys verry much for replying