Well done Alex, a great way to respond to the prompt and get your message across to your audience. I especially liked the way you used your feelings to influence the opinion of your reader. Well done.
I love your great adjectives that you used! if the unknown soldier read this he would be so pleased with you. I like your sentence when it says ” for delivering peace and civilization
well done Alex you have really expressed your feelings to the unknown soldier and have really hooked your reader. please fix your punctuation such as “were” into “we’re.
Well done Alex, a great way to respond to the prompt and get your message across to your audience. I especially liked the way you used your feelings to influence the opinion of your reader. Well done.
Well done Alex a very heartfelt piece of writing. Remember capital letters at the beginning of sentences.
thanks for the really nice comment and I will work on my capital letters
well done Alex. I really liked your letter to the unknown soldier. Next time you could put capital letters.
I love your great adjectives that you used! if the unknown soldier read this he would be so pleased with you. I like your sentence when it says ” for delivering peace and civilization
well done Alex you have really expressed your feelings to the unknown soldier and have really hooked your reader. please fix your punctuation such as “were” into “we’re.
good job!
Hamzah Ismail
alex awesome stuff. I liked the sentence “for delivering peace and civilization to the whole wide world.”
Alex I like how you used emotional words like we wold like you said you sacrificed your sort life for the world