Well done Lakshithaa, some great personal detail to add a personal touch to your message. Lets work at using more grown up vocabulary.
I really liked your work it really makes me feel that I was there. But next time use capital letters and full stops. Well done by Amina.
thank you for giving me god tips on how to improve my writing.
Well done lakshithaa. Fantastic vocabulary. Some great detail. You have used the prompt very well. Remember capital letters. Very well done
thanks for your comment. i will use your tip.
I love yours its really cool. and I liked the part when you used rhymes to describe what your son said. Arafah
Hi lakshithaa, Well done on taking part in the 100 Word Challenge. This is a very good piece and captures the mood of returning soldiers very well. Keep up the good work. Niamh Team 100 Ireland
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Well done Lakshithaa, some great personal detail to add a personal touch to your message. Lets work at using more grown up vocabulary.
I really liked your work it really makes me feel that I was there. But next time use capital letters and full stops. Well done by Amina.
thank you for giving me god tips on how to improve my writing.
Well done lakshithaa. Fantastic vocabulary. Some great detail.
You have used the prompt very well. Remember capital letters. Very well done
thanks for your comment. i will use your tip.
I love yours its really cool. and I liked the part when you used rhymes to describe what your son said.
Arafah
Hi lakshithaa,
Well done on taking part in the 100 Word Challenge. This is a very good piece and captures the mood of returning soldiers very well.
Keep up the good work.
Niamh Team 100 Ireland