A great way to respond to the prompt Prithikaa, I especially liked the way you addressed the soldier directly and left him with a positive message. Well done
Well done for this week’s 100wc challenge, Prithikaa. You’ve shown a real empathy with the unknown soldier and actually sound as if you’re giving them some comfort by telling them they have done their best and that no-one could do any better. I also like the way you’ve been very precise with your language – “you won’t ever be forgotten” is a good example of that. Keep writing!
What a lovely piece of writing, Prithikaa, I like the idea of writing a letter to an unknown soldier. Your opening line is very powerful and captures the spirit of Remembrance Day – that we are not just remembering the famous generals and well known heroes but the ordinary soldiers, even those whose names were not known. I also found your last line very moving. Well done!
Nice work, Prithiakaa ! Very thoughtful in remembering the soldiers who sacrificed their life to keep us safe and enjoy our life with family and friends.
Hi, prithikaa
I love the way you created a moving and heart warming letter to the unknown soldier. Your told him how he said ” you will never be the slightest bit forgotten”. maybe next time use more adjectives. Like I said a lovely heat warming letter
Hi Prithiakaa ,
Thank you for commenting my work I read it and really liked what you commenting me. I read your letter to the unone solder. You used lots of wow words and I liked the way you used because in your work. Well done Prithikaa I’m shore you will grow up to be a writer.
From Romasa
A great way to respond to the prompt Prithikaa, I especially liked the way you addressed the soldier directly and left him with a positive message. Well done
Well done for this week’s 100wc challenge, Prithikaa. You’ve shown a real empathy with the unknown soldier and actually sound as if you’re giving them some comfort by telling them they have done their best and that no-one could do any better. I also like the way you’ve been very precise with your language – “you won’t ever be forgotten” is a good example of that. Keep writing!
What a lovely piece of writing, Prithikaa, I like the idea of writing a letter to an unknown soldier. Your opening line is very powerful and captures the spirit of Remembrance Day – that we are not just remembering the famous generals and well known heroes but the ordinary soldiers, even those whose names were not known. I also found your last line very moving. Well done!
Nice work, Prithiakaa ! Very thoughtful in remembering the soldiers who sacrificed their life to keep us safe and enjoy our life with family and friends.
Hi, prithikaa
I love the way you created a moving and heart warming letter to the unknown soldier. Your told him how he said ” you will never be the slightest bit forgotten”. maybe next time use more adjectives. Like I said a lovely heat warming letter
Hi Prithiakaa ,
Thank you for commenting my work I read it and really liked what you commenting me. I read your letter to the unone solder. You used lots of wow words and I liked the way you used because in your work. Well done Prithikaa I’m shore you will grow up to be a writer.
From Romasa