The slowest animal

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2 Responses to The slowest animal

  1. nanand says:

    What an interesting way to respond to the prompt. I like the way you used such a variety of adjectives to emphasise just how different all the animals are; that’s something clever writers do!
    Next time remember to check you haven’t missed any punctuation before you publish.

    Keep it up.
    Mrs Moore

  2. surea says:

    hi very good

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