the mountain accident

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2 Responses to the mountain accident

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Yunus,
    You’ve published this before too!
    Mrs M

  2. Philip Waller says:

    What an interesting ending. You have made me infer about what could have possibly happened, without describing the gruesome details. You have used some good adjectives and some vivid verbs. Well done.
    Philip Waller,
    Auckland, New Zealand,
    http://pwsroom14.blogspot.co.nz/

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