Hello Shuhana,
Oh my goodness, this was a scary piece to read, with such gruesome ending too. I wonder if you could go back and read through it, checking to see where the punctuation needs to go and take out information that is not needed in this piece of exciting writing. Editing is what good writers do. Good luck.
Hello Shuhana,
Oh my goodness, this was a scary piece to read, with such gruesome ending too. I wonder if you could go back and read through it, checking to see where the punctuation needs to go and take out information that is not needed in this piece of exciting writing. Editing is what good writers do. Good luck.
Hello Shuhana,
I like how you have used certain words to create atmospheric tension for your story. Well done! 🙂
From Sara
it’s very good and very descriptive
what a way to frighten a reader! nice work, Shuhana. A spooky setting, and a spooky story.