Very dreamlike James. A pond that becomes a river and then the shark, what a nightmare. Small errors but mostly you have a good idea supported by some good punctuation and sentence structure. The ending was clever. Ms McGrath (Team 100), Australia
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Very dreamlike James. A pond that becomes a river and then the shark, what a nightmare. Small errors but mostly you have a good idea supported by some good punctuation and sentence structure. The ending was clever.
Ms McGrath (Team 100), Australia