I love your story Abhinav, you have used lots of complex and adult words. Your work has really improved from some of your old one-hundred word challenges, I like the word swiftly because it is better than fast. In one sentence above you forgot to put a space so just check that teeny weeny tiny error. 🙂 Zaeem 5B :p
I like your story, brilliant adjectives. Work on little things like spaces between words.(Between clouds& coincidently)
From Sachien 5B
I love your story Abhinav, you have used lots of complex and adult words. Your work has really improved from some of your old one-hundred word challenges, I like the word swiftly because it is better than fast. In one sentence above you forgot to put a space so just check that teeny weeny tiny error. 🙂 Zaeem 5B :p
Wow! abinav , did you get it from today’s solar eclipse
it was really violent at one time well done !